Would have been better in Audio portal...
Hey. I didn't like this, the video was just far too random. The music was hypnotic though, so I think you'd be better off putting the track on the audio portal and maybe other people can do a better job at making a video.
Sorry if this seems harsh!
O no its not harsh it was actually in the audio portal then I got bored and wanted to practise animating so I pulled it up.
WOW!!!
I totally love the neon style you have used for this. It's VERY impressive! I see also that is works perfectly with the music!
I honestly think you should make it bigger though! What I mean by that is actually give yourself a bigger canvas.
I reckon you should enlarge that to 800*600 pixels, exported it as an EXE file, then renamed the extention .SCR and you would have a WICKED screensaver!!
Wicked! Really well done!!
Try stretching the swf, then watch your computer suffer a slow death :D (perhaps not the case if you got an ultra machine)
Simple, Effective, Catchy!
I like this a LOT! It keeps me amused during boring lunchtimes at work, and also keeps my co-workers relatively annoyed coz they keep singing it!!
Cool!
Hey, thanks! Glad you like it!
This is kinda cute...
I quite like this! Ususally first flash submissions by people are pretty dire! But this one is actually quite nice!
Your characters are simple and somehow kinda cute, and the story is kinda funny!
I can tell you've spent a lot of your time on the graphics, and animating.
Your sound could be a little bit better, for example the thuds as your characters hit bystanders were a little loud, but that will come with practice!
Keep it up, you've done really well!
Thank you, I'll check out your stuff!
This WAS showing promise...
... until it unexpectedly finished.
The graphics could be better. Your sound is ok, but an obvious rip-off, and your ending totally sucked.
Makie it longer, clean it up a whole lot and you'd have a great flash.
Well i guess its okay for a second flash but well, i did this in one day, i dint put a lot of time or effort on this
Oh great...
Another Stick figure series...
Just what Newgrounds needs....
NOT!!!
For 1: Don't simply rip off Pulp Fiction as your audio. Spend time on your own audio.
For 2: Apend time on creating some good looking graphics. Do you KNOW how much shitty stick figure crap is already out there? From the trailer, your series will be blammed...
For 3: you really need to work on the opening shot. All it shows is a stil for like 5 minutes, then a badly designed link to another crappy drawn video.
Your viewers would've switched off by then!
Good luck however!
Your third point is valid. I know what you mean. As for the other two, almost all of the audio was just a song that happened to be in Pulp Fiction. Should we compose our own music for each animation we make? Also, if the trailer didn't get blammed, why would the series? Lastly, this animation is better animated than your one submission.
Thank you for your time.
Question....
If you (clearly) have the patience to sit there and animate a claymation flash such as this one, why don't you have the patience to site and write one worth watching?
The animation is smooth and fairly well done, however, I think you could be doing with making a film that is more interesting that a blue clay guy hitting a punchbag...
Please don't get me wrong, the WORK is great, but the CONTENT is lacking somewhat I feel...
Try again!!!
Then why don't you write me a script. (by the way i'm serious)
Haha!!!
You really have got the knack for taking the piss out of the sprite games flashes that haunt this site daily!! I like it!! U get a 4!!
Taking the piss?
Not bad! (Could be better...)
When I read the description, I was thinking this was gonna be another "BLAM" movie, so I was surprised by the effort you've put into it!
As the review blow mentioned, the sound made the file a lot bigger than it needed to be. It didn't bother me (I'm on Broadband), but Dial-up users would benefit from it more.
You show a lot of patience the fact that you've done this FBF, but may I suggest looking at motion and shape tweening as other options, as this could really speed up the time it takes you.
Sound effects would help us to understand what each sketch is about, as would more detailed drawings. The muscle guy was quite detailed, so it was easy to see what was happening, but some of the other ones were too sketchy and too quick to get what they were.
I could start actually analysising the fact you have an "eating" theme running through this, and how this could either be a glimpse into your psyche, but I won't... LOL! Keep it up!
thank you 4 the amasin review you must be really expeirenced
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