Thelittlerich's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[mouse game tutorial]

I liked the music!

This is a poor attempt at providing a tutorial!

For one, you have not provided a demonstration of how the finished actionscript will work, and for 2, you haven't worked on this for very long. Your buttons are unlickable unles you take the time to click on the edges. Half the time, they don't go back to the previous page.

The main reason I like this flash is that I REALLY like the tune you're playing on it! What version of "What Is Love" by Haddaway is this?! and could you get in touch with me so I could find out please?

Otherwise, you have a good tutorial in the making!

yodd responds:

lol, review zero, harsh... very harsh, almost unfair for it does give an explanation. its what is love by neosoviet, gtfo and click the link now. fatal killed my cats

[Turtle Sim]

Could be better...

OK, I know turtles are slow. OK, I know they aren't the most exciting species on this planet, but I think you could spruce this game up a bit...

GOOD POINTS:
The game is easy enough to play. You click on FEED, SLEEP, TOY or TO/FROM WATER and the turtle does that.

BAD POINTS:
There doesn't appear to be any objective to this game. I tried just feeding it, and it went from excited to kinda happy, then a quick go on the toy brought it back up again... I hate to say it, but I tried to keep the turtle awake and see it explode, but I didn't manage, coz all I had to do was send it to sleep once and it was fine...

You have the basis of a game here, but as it is, there is no point as you say in your description...

Work on it and resubmit!

XxwaSSupxX responds:

Well i did say theres no point to is, so you can't yell at me for that. but yeah. It's not all peaches and cream.

[Website Perhaps?]

Good Lookin site. Functions well...

Maybe it's just a bit small... I can see it's a template, and doesn't actually do much, but I think it's great work, and the basis of an excellent site for the school! Just make it BIGGER!!! I can hardly see the text / icons / buttons ect.

Mr-manson69 responds:

Thanks lol, yer didnt quite work out the way i expected with the text and all..and besides its only an intro thing to a movie im working on.=D